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Re: You Need to Go Into Comedy...the Dancing Nurse?
Posted By: maybemd2b In Response To: You Need to Go Into Comedy...the Dancing Nurse? (Sam Freedom)
Date: Wednesday, 3 August 2005, at 11:15 p.m.
> Zapseo,
> I enjoyed Andy's opening line, too.
> It actually shows a tremendous amount
> of potential in Andy to open with a line
> like that. Getting attention is the first
> rule of copy creation...get their attention.> I'd say he did alright.
> Now where's me spinach?
> Sam
> ps look ma, no links!me neither...
btw -- I'm rethinking this nursing stuff for the moment (at least for fall return). They want to do a background check, complete with blood draw. Fair enough. But *I* don't know how well my background info, once collected, is kept private.
zapseo
Andy--liked the copy. ...competition trembling in their boots... nice.
.. nice.
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