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Re: Sales copy critique and help

Posted By: Phillip
Date: Thursday, 19 December 2002, at 2:18 a.m.

In Response To: Sales copy critique and help (Shawn Lebrun)

Hi Shawn,

Your ad copy looks good to me ... seems maybe a bit long.

Two suggestions:

In your " I Tried " check list,

It seems that the "I tried diets" is maybe a bit redundant ... maybe. Perhaps the word 'diet' by itself ... get more opinions here :)

In your gray box that contains " 12 Simple Steps to get huge and Shredded " It would stand out better in a darker color, plus make it easier to read.

Phillip

lip

Messages In This Thread

Sales copy critique and help
Shawn Lebrun -- Wednesday, 18 December 2002, at 11:03 p.m.
Re: Sales copy critique and help
Phillip -- Thursday, 19 December 2002, at 2:18 a.m.
Re: Sales copy critique and help
Jennifer Richards -- Thursday, 19 December 2002, at 3:11 p.m.
Re: Sales copy critique and help
J Leach -- Sunday, 22 December 2002, at 12:21 p.m.
Re: Sales copy critique and help
Jani Ghaffor -- Thursday, 23 August 2007, at 9:46 p.m.

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