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Re: Help, need advice on redesigned website
Posted By: Jimmy Boyd In Response To: Help, need advice on redesigned website (Dale)
Date: Friday, 15 September 2006, at 12:55 p.m.
Well, the vocals (don't know if it's you) are quite pitchy. It sounds like you have pre-recorded background music, and the audio quality of the music is much better than the vocals. Personally, I think the lyrics are cheesy, but others might certainly like it. As you know, music is very subjective, so I wouldn't sweat the lyrics.
The site is very hard to read. The text is too small, and it's probably because you are trying to create three columns. It looks all jumbled because of that. The grammar and punctuation need some proofreading.
Overall, I would rearrange it into two columns at most. To the right, you can have a bigger headline and explain how you created your song. Then, right below that, you can place your ad. Then, below the ad, you can have the space for others to submit their content.
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