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Re: Help, need advice on redesigned website
Posted By: Dale In Response To: Re: Help, need advice on redesigned website (Jimmy Boyd)
Date: Saturday, 16 September 2006, at 4:26 a.m.
Hi Jimmy,
I'd like to thank you for your honest feedback. I agree that the vocals in not quite as good as the music. my plans is to get back into the studio to improve on this. And I will.
As for the site, I tried to achieve a newpaper layout (With template). Sometimes this may not be the best for the internet.
I'll get busy on this.
Thanks much for your help
dale
> Well, the vocals (don't know if it's you) are quite pitchy. It sounds like
> you have pre-recorded background music, and the audio quality of the music
> is much better than the vocals. Personally, I think the lyrics are cheesy,
> but others might certainly like it. As you know, music is very subjective,
> so I wouldn't sweat the lyrics.> The site is very hard to read. The text is too small, and it's probably
> because you are trying to create three columns. It looks all jumbled
> because of that. The grammar and punctuation need some proofreading.> Overall, I would rearrange it into two columns at most. To the right, you
> can have a bigger headline and explain how you created your song. Then,
> right below that, you can place your ad. Then, below the ad, you can have
> the space for others to submit their content.
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