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Re: Landing page critique
Posted By: Phillip In Response To: Landing page critique (mdbmarketing)
Date: Tuesday, 28 August 2007, at 12:00 a.m.
Hi Mindy,
I like it
It doesn't promise the earth, moon and stars ... it's a good teaser ... you give just enough info to have folks sign up to your ecourse
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Think I'll sign up to it and read more
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Did you write the copy yourself? Just curious ...
Thanks,
Phillip
> I am setting up a sales page for my free e-course and would love your
> critique.> http://www.businesspromotionunleashed.com/sales-page.htm Does the
> headline grab your attention?> Is it too long & does it give away too much information?
> How is the copy?
> Thank you so much in advance for your thoughts, good or bad.
> Mindy
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