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Re: Landing page critique

Posted By: Phillip
Date: Tuesday, 28 August 2007, at 12:00 a.m.

In Response To: Landing page critique (mdbmarketing)

Hi Mindy,

I like it :) It doesn't promise the earth, moon and stars ... it's a good teaser ... you give just enough info to have folks sign up to your ecourse :)

Think I'll sign up to it and read more :)

Did you write the copy yourself? Just curious ...

Thanks,

Phillip

> I am setting up a sales page for my free e-course and would love your
> critique.

> http://www.businesspromotionunleashed.com/sales-page.htm Does the
> headline grab your attention?

> Is it too long & does it give away too much information?

> How is the copy?

> Thank you so much in advance for your thoughts, good or bad.

> Mindy

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Messages In This Thread

Landing page critique
mdbmarketing -- Monday, 27 August 2007, at 10:13 p.m.
Re: Landing page critique
Phillip -- Tuesday, 28 August 2007, at 12:00 a.m.
Re: Landing page critique
Phillip -- Tuesday, 28 August 2007, at 12:03 a.m.
Re: Landing page critique
mdbmarketing -- Tuesday, 28 August 2007, at 12:33 a.m.

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